Monday, August 22, 2011

Rain

Here it falls. Tumbling through the air and plunging on the ground like a fumbling panda grazing in the bright green bamboo. Slowly rolling, it creates a small puddle in the moss. the sun awakens from behind the clouds and all is left of the little puddle is dew.


2 comments:

  1. Zion, I like the way you have compared a panda with the rain. It makes a very clear simile and a picture for the reader.

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  2. Dear Zion,

    I have never heard rain compared to a "fumbling panda." Great imagery. My class will be participating in the blogging challenge as yours is. Keep up the good work.

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